An interesting aspect of writing fiction…

There are many interesting things about writing fiction.  But one in particular has really stood out to me.

The author has to have an equal measure of motivation for each of the characters they write.  The main characters at least.  And when you are trying to write fantasy that will have multiple leads, the writer’s job gets complicated.  You’re getting inside the mind of each of these characters.  With each conversation you’re playing each part.  You’re asking yourself about each character’s motivations and why they would say that particular line.

In my story my primary lead is a boy named Peter.  I’m enjoying writing his story.  I don’t have much trouble writing his chapters.  I like him.  But there are some characters I’m not sure about.  It’s not that I don’t like them, I just don’t have the same motivation.

But in order to give each character life, to really flesh them out, I’ve got to feel for them.  Now, this doesn’t mean I have to like them.  No, what I’ve found is that hate is just as strong as love.

The thing you want to avoid while writing is indifference.  If you are indifferent about a character–something needs to change.  You might consider giving them some trait that make’s your character more likable or more controversial.  You might give some back ground detail that evokes a strong reaction.  You might have them do something that raises the stakes of the story.  Whatever it is, it can’t be subtle.  If you are indifferent about a character, chances are your reader will be as well.

If you can’t find a way to care about your character, then get rid of them.  It’s just that simple.  The only problem is…it’s really not simple.

Writing is emotionally tiring for this reason.  Emotion is a strong factor when it comes to mental and physical fatigue.  So don’t forget to take a break every now and then.  Do some reading.  Watch a movie.  Go for a run.  Do something to relax.  Then get back to it.

Feel free to share your own stories about dealing with characters.

Keep Writing…

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Writing Non-Fiction

I’ve been trying to write Fiction this summer.  This is quite a leap from what I’m used to.  In fact, the list of fiction I’ve read is pretty short compared the list of non-fiction I’ve read.  It’s been an interesting and challenging change.

However, I’ve been tutoring one of my students who is about to go to college.  He wants to study in English so he wanted to practice his writing.  In order to do this we’ve been reading William Zinsser’s book On Writing Well.  This book, while primarily written from a news columnist’s point of view, still has some great advice on writing in general.  One of the early thing he talks about is possibly one of the best things I’ve read on writing non-fiction.

“What are you trying to say?”

This is the question you’ve got to constantly ask yourself.  Whether you’re writing for a local news corp or your writing a term paper, this question could mean the difference between an acceptable work and a great work.

This is especially important for those who write about theology or philosophy.  I can’t tell you how many poorly written books I’ve read.  All the author has to do is ask himself or herself the question, “What am I trying to say?”

This can mean the difference between saying what you need to say simply or over-writing.  Over-writing comes from the fear of needing to answer as many possible objections or questions that come to your mind while writing.  But you don’t need to.  Decide what point you want to make and make that point simply and clearly.  Over-writing can also cause the reader to miss your point.  They get caught up in your explanation and soon they are lost in the forest of your words.

This can also be the difference of simple, easy to follow sentences and sentences that are so convoluted that the reader can’t follow your argument.  Know your audience, write simple sentences, and ask yourself the question, “What am I trying to say?”  You don’t want your reader to have reread what you’ve written and you don’t want them getting tired of your complicated explanations and prose.

One more thing to consider, if you can’t make your point simply, maybe it’s not worth making.

Keep writing…

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The Hardest Part of Writing…

The hardest part of writing is, well, writing…

I know that doesn’t sound very sexy but lets face the facts, writing means you’ve got to sit your ass down and write.  And that is perhaps the hardest part.  Sure, you’ve got ideas floating around in that noggin’ of yours, but putting them down on paper in a readable way is hard.  But overcoming this hurdle is the first step to making your dreams come true as a writer.

Books out there will recommend a variety of things.  Perhaps they give you a list of exercises to do to get the creative juices flowing.  But if you’re already not sitting down to write then exercises won’t help you.  Perhaps they give you a form to help you get started, like a form to give you that exhilarating back-cover blurb which will surely get people to read your work.  But if you’re not sitting down to write, then it doesn’t do you much good.

No, you’ve got to sit down and write.  It really is that simple.  Maybe setting yourself a goal is good and maybe not.  If you set your goal high and don’t achieve it you may find yourself discouraged.  But if you have no goal, then you probably won’t be sitting down to write.  No, you need to give yourself a small goal that you can meet.  If you go over your goal, you’re that much better off.

Maybe start with 100 words a day.  That’s it, 100 words.  Most writers can’t just write 100 words so you’ll probably exceed your goal, and that will feel good.  Maybe your goal is one sentence a day.  That’s fine.  That’s great!  As long as you’re writing.  Eventually you’ll want to up that goal.  But this is the first step to making your stories happen.  If you’re not writing you’re not getting better at writing and your story isn’t being told.

Starting a story is perhaps the easiest part (despite what people may say).  Most people can sit down and knock out 5 or 6 pages.  But finishing is the hard work.  And the only way to make that happen is to keep writing.

So, keep writing…

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Lament for a Son

I just finished reading Nicholas Wolterstorff’s Lament for a Son and wanted to share a few quotes.  He wrote this after his 25 year old son died in a climbing accident.  The first part of the book is an exercise in reflection and remembrance.  The latter part he reflects more on the idea of death and mourning.

“Blessed are those who mourn.”  What can it mean?  One can understand why Jesus hails those who hunger and thirst for righteousness, why he hails the merciful, why he hails the pur in heart, why he hails the peacemakers, why he hails those who endure under persecution.  These are qualities of character which belong to the life of the kingdom.  But why does he hail the mourners of the world?  Why cheer tears?  It must be that mourning is also a quality of character that belongs to the life of his realm…

 

We are one in suffering.  Some are wealthy, som bright; some athletic, som admired.  But we all suffer.  For we all prize and love; and in this present existence of ours, prizing and loving yeild suffering.  Love in our world is suffering love.  Some do not suffer much, though, for they do not love much.  Suffering is for the loving.  If I hadn’t loved him, there wouldn’t be this agony.

 

This, said Jesus, is the command of the Holy One:  ”You shall love your neighbor as yourself.”  IN commanding us to love, God invites us to suffer.

 

God IS LOVE.  That is why he suffers.

 

To love our suffering sinful world is to suffer.  God so suffered for the world that he gave his only Son to suffering.  The one who does not see God’s suffering does not see his love.  God is suffering love…

 

“PUT YOUR HAND into my wounds,” said the risen Jesus to Thomas, “and you will know who I am.”  The wounds of Christ are his identity…

 

Slowly I begin to see that there is something more as well.  To believe in Christ’s rising and death’s dying is also to live with the power and the challenge to rise up now from all our dark graves of suffering love…

 

So I shall struggle to live the reality of Christ’s rising and death’s dying.  In my living, my son’s dying will not be the last word. But as I rise up, I bear the wounds of his death.  My rising does not remove them.  They mark me.  If you want to know who I am, put your hand in.

 

“Lament for a Son” was a great and inspiring read.  I recommend it for anyone who has lost a loved one at any time.  It is an incredibly honest look at the trials of death and the suffering that follows.

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Background

When creating a story world from scratch as is common in Science fiction and Fantasy, it is important to understand the backgrounds of your various groups.  Even if you’re writing in modern times, you need to understand the back grounds of your characters, whether they are completely fictional or set in reality.  So take some time to either research your people group/characters, or to write their own history yourself.  Here is an example of brief story line of a people group in the novel I’m working on:

It was the year 4328 of the Age Before when Onoram received word that the Northern most city of our kingdom had fallen in battle to a foreign enemy.  The initial reports indicated that the strength of Pirdith lasted but 5 hours against this force and that some unknown power seemed to strengthen the enemy, as if they were stronger and more fearless than any before them.  From what we could gather at the time, the land of Pirdith lay in ruin and only some survived.  All were taken by a kind of taint and died almost immediately.  The early reports said that most of the casualties were, in fact, not from battle, but resulted from an unknown origin. 

The significance of this was that the Kingdom of Pirdith was known for its grit and brawn, even the women.  The men were typically of a stocky build and known for growing their beards to seemingly unnecessary length.  Despite this, most of the men of Pirdith were atypically cunning in all matters of battle and hunting, as they were primarily a hunting people.  As the records tell they had not lost a battle since the reign of King Demetrius in the year 2719.  But it is said they lost that battle due to rampant sickness among the soldiers who fought despite constant vomiting, fainting, fever and dementia.  While they may have lost, they so devastated the attacking force that the victory ended up for naught. 

One might wonder, if the men and women of Pirdith were of such strength, why have they never challenged Onoram for control of the land.  This is reasonable but the men and women of Pirdith were also known for their loyalty.  As a people, they always seemed quite content to be the foremost warriors of the land.  There were some, from time to time, who aspired to politics and became ambassadors to Onoram.  But even they seemed more interested in brewing ales at their homes and boasting of the last victory of whatever household they came from than actually participating in politics.  This is perhaps because the warriors of Pirdith were so renowned that they felt no need to engage in debate.  They primarily cared about protecting their own borders and secondly the protection of our land as a whole.  Beyond that, they never felt a need to involve themselves in other people’s matters.  This made them quite unpopular amongst the other politicians. 

Besides this, they remained a people unto themselves, drinking and reveling in their prowess.  They excelled at crafting weapons and armor and well as trap making.  They rarely traded with others. It was also rumored some time ago that they had discovered a way to heat metal and fold it, which was the secret to the strength of their armor and weapons.a


a Given this, some people of the realm believe that they are descended from a race of dwarven folk, thought to have existed quite some time ago.  It is said that these people of legend were small in stature, smaller than the Pirdithians, but quite strong and excellent miners.  It is also said that they too grew their beards to unreasonably long lengths.  The Pirdithians take great exception to this of course and have produced manuscripts of lineage dating back to the ancient days of our land.  But given their proclivity to drink and general disinterest in history, these accounts should be taken with a grain of salt, or a pint of ale as would seem more appropriate.

Remember, keep writing…

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Stephen Hawking and God

I’ve always loved science.  I’ve never loved math (which is required for so much of science and a large reason I did not pursue it as a career) but science itself has always been a favorite of mine.  From an early age I loved the process of asking question, finding answers and explaining the way things work.

I also love faith.  But faith and science, it would seem, have not always played well in the sandbox together.  I’ve taken a couple classes on the subject, read a few books and still my curiosity hasn’t been satiated.  I’m certainly no expert in science or faith and have more training as a theologian than a scientist.  That is to say, please forgive any ignorant comments that may follow.

Discovery will air a show for the first time tonight called ‘Curiosity’.  It is a show that promises to ask the hardest questions and try to provide insight from scientific inquiry.  To begin, they aren’t pulling any punches.  Their very first episode is titled ‘Did God Create the Universe?‘  But the title may be misleading.  The first question that pops into my mind is ‘Can science fully prove that God/gods didn’t create the universe?’  The answer to that question will always be ‘No.’

The host of the show will be the famous physicist Stephen Hawking.  Hawking made a splash years ago in his book A Brief History of Time by saying that if we could understand the universe we could glimpse the ‘mind of God’.  This has led to millions of speculations about Hawking’s personal views of religion.  In his most recent book The Grand Design he states that current theories of the Big Bang make the concept of God redundant.  He says this,

“Because there is a law such as gravity, the universe can and will create itself from nothing. Spontaneous creation is the reason there is something rather than nothing, why the universe exists, why we exist. It is not necessary to invoke God to light the blue touch paper and set the universe going.”

In the previews for the show on Discovery Hawking briefly argues this,

“But here’s the crucial bit; the laws of nature themselves tell us that not only can the universe have popped into existence like a proton, and have required nothing in terms of energy, but also that it is possible that nothing caused the Big Bang.”

Hawking says that he has no intention of offending anyone of faith but that science has a more compelling explanation than a divine creator.  Fair enough, I believe him.  He seems a good natured chap.  Part of his explanation is the concept of the multiverse or the theory that there are multiple universes (including our own) that make up everything.  Add to that quantum fluctuations, where ‘virtual particles’ can appear and be measured and you have a Big Bang in no need of a…Bangger.  (Or is it Banger?)  Anyway, I digress.

Now, given the fact that I’m not theoretical physicist and the equation for quantum fluctuations looks like gibberish to me, I do have a few questions that arise when you jump to the conclusion that this means there is no need for God/gods or that God/gods cannot exist.  In all fairness, Hawking doesn’t seem to be saying that the existence of a supernatural being is not possible, but simple not necessary to invoke.  Fair enough.  But most take it a step further and just rule out the possibility based on these theories.  But, do these theories and these observations warrant conclusions about the possibility of God/gods creating the universe?

For example, I find the conclusion that the Big Bang could have happened from nothing odd.  It’s bassed on the above fluctuations which seem to indicate particles arising from nothing.  They weren’t there before, then they are (we know because of measurements) and then perhaps they’re gone.  But isn’t it a bit premature to be drawing conclusions about these particles and using those conclusions as the basis for the origins of the universe?  We used to think that atoms were the smallest of the particles.  Then protons, neutrons and electrons.  Smaller still, we have discovered, are particles known as quarks, those tiny particles that make up the p, t and e.  Who is to say that these virtual particles come from nothing?  Have we explored the depths of all possibilities and 100% concluded that particles really are coming from nothing at all?  I highly doubt that.  But as noted earlier, my assumption about this could be wrong as well.  It just doesn’t seem good to me to make such large scale conclusions about origins or supernatural beings based on laws of nature we don’t fully understand.  Whose to say that in 10 years we won’t discover the cause for those particles that seem to come from nothing?  That would certainly muck op the wheels of the theory.

Then there is the multiverse theory.  There is, of course, no proof for multiple universes.  And no real way to test for them.  We can make guesses that there might be and perhaps in a few years we find a way to test for them and conclusively prove that there are multiple universes.  But why must that rule out a creator?  Where did those multiple universes come from?  Again, does the existence of these things really rule out the possibility of a God?  I don’t think so.  Do they explain things we have observed?  Certainly, but to jump from there to the conclusions that there is nothing else moves you from the field of science.

Take an example from mathematician John Lennox which I will paraphrase here.  Say my Aunt Matilda bakes a cake and brings it before the scientific nobel laureates of the world.  As master of ceremonies I ask them to please explain the cake for me.  Well, the chemist will certainly break down the reactions that caused the baking process and the currently elements that make up the cake and frosting, the physicist will break it down into it’s particles and the atomic and perhaps subatomic levels ect., and what we will be left with is a beautiful description on many levels of the cake before us.  But if ask them, “Why did she bake the cake?”, they will have no reply.  Their purview is to observe and describe.  And those descriptions will certainly have consequences.  Such that, perhaps the frosting is of the kind that is commonly found in wedding cakes, or the the particular make up has been seen in cakes used at birthdays ect.  But these are just conjectures because it would take a certain revelation from my Aunt Maltilda to truly know ‘Why’.  And that in short, is part of the limitation of scientific inquiry.

Can science reveal to me that certain forces, such as gravity, working under certain conditions can seemingly create something from nothing?  Yes.  But can it tell me why?  Why there is something instead of nothing?  Why gravity came to be to begin with?  I don’t think science can properly answer those questions, at least not in a definitive observable way.

I will end with another quote from John Lennox which can be found here:

But, as both a scientist and a Christian, I would say that Hawking’s claim is misguided. He asks us to choose between God and the laws of physics, as if they were necessarily in mutual conflict.

But contrary to what Hawking claims, physical laws can never provide a complete explanation of the universe. Laws themselves do not create anything, they are merely a description of what happens under certain conditions.

What Hawking appears to have done is to confuse law with agency. His call on us to choose between God and physics is a bit like someone demanding that we choose between aeronautical engineer Sir Frank Whittle and the laws of physics to explain the jet engine.

That is a confusion of category. The laws of physics can explain how the jet engine works, but someone had to build the thing, put in the fuel and start it up. The jet could not have been created without the laws of physics on their own  -  but the task of development and creation needed the genius of Whittle as its agent.

Similarly, the laws of physics could never have actually built the universe. Some agency must have been involved.

To use a simple analogy, Isaac Newton’s laws of motion in themselves never sent a snooker ball racing across the green baize. That can only be done by people using a snooker cue and the actions of their own arms.

Hawking’s argument appears to me even more illogical when he says the existence of gravity means the creation of the universe was inevitable. But how did gravity exist in the first place? Who put it there? And what was the creative force behind its birth?

Similarly, when Hawking argues, in support of his theory of spontaneous creation, that it was only necessary for ‘the blue touch paper’ to be lit to ‘set the universe going’, the question must be: where did this blue touch paper come from? And who lit it, if not God?

Much of the rationale behind Hawking’s argument lies in the idea that there is a deep-seated conflict between science and religion. But this is not a discord I recognise.

 

If anyone responds, lets remember to be civil.  And please remember that I’m just as fallible as the next.

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Story World

From Writing Fiction for Dummies

Every story world has three essential components.  Without each of these three components, you simply can’t have a story:

  • The Natural World: When you describe the natural world, you create a sense of place.  The natural world includes everything there is to know about the physical environment.  Normally you don’t mess with the laws of physics or chemistry in your novel, bt you do have to know the geography, typical weather patterns, and a thousand other details…
  • The Cultural Groups:  If your novel is set in a small town, you may have only one cultural group.  If it’s in New York City, you may have characters from five or six ethnic groups interacting (and misunderstanding each other).  If you’re writing about the planet Zorba, you may have a dozen intelligent species.
  • The backdrop of conflict:  This is the political or cultural or religious or interpersonal climate that makes it possible for your story to have conflict.  Without conflict, you have no story.
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So What?

So what?  It’s a common question.  One we inevitably ask all the time.  I was reading recently in Donald Maass’ book Writing the Breakout Novel and in James Scott Bell’s book (you can find links to these books on my Books page) about this very question.

When you go to sell your concept or book or short story, one of the most inevitable questions that will be asked is ‘So what?’  Why do we care about your character?  Why do we want them to succeed or fail?  If your answer to this question isn’t sufficient, you’ll have a boring story.

But this doesn’t necessarily mean that you need introduce the worst possible case, such as the end of the world or death in every scene.  It may be the case for your overall storyline, but you need to ask this question in every scene.  With each scene ask yourself, ‘So what?’  What are the consequences of this conversation, or this action or series of events?  It may have been made clear in a previous scene but if it hasn’t you might want to go back and make sure it’s clear what is at stake.

And these stakes may be external or internal.  It may very well be death or some kind of bodily harm, but it may very well be disappointment as well.  If Billy doesn’t make it home in time for dinner, Mom will be disappointed (internal).  So what?  If mom is disappointed she will ground Billy.  So what? If Billy is grounded he’ll miss the party where he was going to ask out the love of his young life on a date (external).  This is just a basic example.  Th point it is, keep asking yourself, ‘So what?’  What are the stakes here?  If you find that the stakes are high enough, raise the stakes.

Remember, just keep writing…

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The beginning must end…

It is the beginning of a work that the writer throws away.

Several delusions weaken the writer’s resolve to throw away work. If he has read his pages too often, those pages will have a necessary quality, the ring of the inevitable, like poetry known by heart; they will perfectly answer their own familiar rhythms. He will retain them. He may retain those pages if they possess some virtues, such as power in themselves, though they lack the cardinal virtue, which is pertinence to, and unity with, the book’s thrust. Sometimes the writer leaves his early chapters in place from gratitude; he cannot contemplate them or read them without feeling again the blessed relief that exalted him when the words first appeared–relief taht the was writing anything at all. That beginning served to get him where he was going, after all; surely the reader needs it, too, as groundwork. But no.

Every year the aspiring photographer brought a stack of his best prints to an old, honored photographer, seeking his judgment. Every year the old man studied the prints and painstakingly ordered them into two piles, bad and good. Every year the old man moved a certain landscape print into the bad stack. At length he turned to the young man: “You submit this same landscape every year, and every year I put it on the bad stack. Why do you like it so much?” The young photographer said, “Because I had to climb a mountain to get it.”

–From, The Writing Life by Annie Dillard

I love this quote because it reminds me just how hard writing is. You create these characters, breathe live into them only to find later that they must be put out. Your own sentences, you find, are not serving you or your goals. And so they must die.

Self editing is perhaps the cruelest thing that a writing must do, but it is necessary. As a gardener prunes his plants to get the desired growth so too must the writer prune their own creation. Most will not or cannot kill their own child. But the writer must do just that. Whenever new sentences are born, new thoughts delivered into the world, many of them are only destined for death. Writing is a cruel and unusual business.

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Hello world!

Well, this is the place where all my would be thoughts will end up soon. Until then you’ll just have to wait in anticipation.

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